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Simpson fanfic
Name: Sideshow Bob the drunks snitch id:6762642

Firstly the reason why i watch simpson cartoons is because they are funny,they highlight the stupidity of america and conservitive culture in a cartoon.The simpsons portray these ideas through the simpson family everyday life.I think this fanfic was ok,its descriptions were a bit brief but the characters were portrayed well(sideshow bob,cecil,chief wigim),i could imagine these characters saying the script in a real simpson cartoon.The fanfic also jumps to a scene which says '2 days later',this is rare for simpson cartoons but still vialble.The author should have elaborated more about what happened to the springfield residents after alchahol was banned(because to many people got drunk on st.patricks day) .Overall i thought 6/10 and with more description and character detail it would become a much better fanfic.




2nd review
author:Lisabeth Simpson
name:waylon symthers and montgomery burns id:5915691

I thought this fanfic was pretty good.The story is about Weylan Smythers and how he met Mr.Burns.Weylans character in the simpsons in a smart under confident man who gets abused by Mr.Burns but seems to worship him like a god.I think that the the plot of Smythers getting beaten by his step farther and drunk mother is plauseable but i doubt they would ever make a real cartoon on this as it is a little sensitive.The characters had good descriptions but i felt the grammer was incorrect in some places.The author is french so english is not her first language.The end to the fanfic is good because Mr.Burns says "my name is Montgomery Burns",this is apprioate as in the real simpsons Weylan meets Mr.Burns like this.



3rd review
Author:Tomboy Skater
name:Muntz story id:5518050

I feel this fanfic is poorly wtitten and lacks any depth or action.The author introduces too many new characters which makes the story hard to understand and believe.There is too much dialogue and not enough description setting the scene.The fanfic plot is strongly based(mabey copied)from a past simpsons episode where Lisa falls in love with Nelson Muntz.I therefore feel that this fanfic is not original.



4th review
author:Nushiepie
name:barts subsitute id:6463294

This fanfic is good for the amount that has been written.Although it is it short it has an interesting and plauseable plot which is written well.The fanfic is about Bart and Milhouse talking about what they will do when the subsitute teacher comes.In the real simpsons Bart is always trying to trick teachers and make their life more miserable.I could imagine all the charcters in the fanfic saying the script in the real simpsons e.g Milhouse saying he can't cause trouble with Bart because he has to help his dad lay out the avacardo dip for his dads 'divorce group'.The ending is very good because it turns out Homer is going to be the class's subsitute teacher(the author may have got his idea from 1 simpson episode where the teachers are on strike and Marge is Barts teacher).If the fanfic was a little bit longer i feel it would be better but overall it was very good.



5th review
author:Marcen12
name:freaky friday id:6308308

This fanfic is based on the fights that Homer and Bart oftrn have.It is about Bart writing 'Ben Afflick' on Homers forehead when he is asleep,when Homer awakes he see's his forehead in the mirror and goes into a rage.He runs into Barts room to go and strangle him but slips on a soap bar and falls out of the window.I think that this type of script funny when your watching a cartoon.Although i can image the scene but it it is not as funny as watching the cartoon where Homer and Bart fight.I think that the fanfic is a little bit boring because anyone could write about Homer chasing Bart around their house.I don't really understand what motivated him to write this fanfic.



6th review
author:queentakhsis
name:The dying song id:6482587

This is one of the best fanfic about the simpsons i have read so far.It is unique because it is written in the first person.The author is mr.Burns and it is dialoge with Weylan Smithers.The fanfic is about mr.Burns and Weylan Smithers being stuck in a cave on a mountain due to an avalanche(author may have got the idea from a real simpsons episode where Homer and mr.Burns were stuck in a hut on a mountain after an avalanche).The descriptions of the scenery and 2 characters are excellent and i really could imagine this happening in a real simpsons cartoon.The author also wrote a poem and put 4 lines of the poem inbetween each paragraph.I thought the poem was a bit weird as it makes the fanfic a bit too serious but the poem rhymed and overall it fitted into the fanfic well.The story is very 'good' because in the real simpsons you get the feeling that mr.Burns and Weylon Smithers love each other.At the end of the fanfic they both kiss after being rescued from the mountain and i feel this is an good ending.The author obviously spent a lot of time writing this at it shows in the quality of writing.



7th review
author:drebom
name:the bartman flies id:6688073

This fanfic is about Bart and Milhouse turning into superheroes.The story is quite boring and unimagitive.It is about Apu(convienence shop owner) going missing and Bart and Milhouse try to solve the case.The dialoge that Bart and Milhouse say is true to character but the descriptions of scenes and events are very brief and poor.The story is also short but it is to be continued.The story ends when Bart seems someone in his room at night,the author then writes 'to be continued'.There have been many simpson episodes where Bart turns into a superhero so i feel the authors story is not completly original.




8th review
author:frankierox1996
name:bob's revenge id:6545870


This fanfic was very poorly written.There was hardly and punctuation used which may the fanfic hard to read and understand.The fanfic was about Sideshow Bob talking with his wife Violeta about stealing Fat Tonys violin.He wants to steal it because Fat Tony stole his 100 year old watch from him when they were kids.This fanfic lacks imagination,grammer and anything interesting.I do not know why he wrote this as nothing actually happens in this fanfic.The fanfic is also very short which mabey is a good thing as a longer version would be even more boring.




9th review
author:undeadsamarai01
name:simpsons antartic adventure id:5991766

This fanfic was written well and was quite funny.Although the name of the fanfic is simpsons antartic adventure is having nothing to do with antartic until the very end of the story.The story is about the nuclear power plant where Homer works.It is up to Homer to save everyone but he has no idea what to do so he calls the Lisa.The character dialoge is this fanfic was very good and true to the character of Homer and Lisa.The descriptions in the fanfic are very detailed and i can imagine the story happening.The fanfic is funny because the author describes how useless Homer is at his job(the manual for the nucluear reactor was hollowed out so Homer could put doughnuts it there.In the end Lisa tells Homer what to do over the phone and the problem is solved.I feel that the ending is not very good.Homer goes to mr.Burns office and mr.Burns tells him he is going to work in Antartica.This does not tie in with the story.Apart from the ending this was a well written and funny fanfic




10th review
author:boxofscraps
name:spider pig to the rescue id:6338142

This fanfic includes iron man and a pig from the simpsons movie.The fanfic is quite weird.It is about the spider pig walking on the ceiling when iron man blasts through the ceiling and takes spider pig.The dialoge of Homer is written well e.g"There goes my baby...seems like just yesterday I snatched him from the arms of a tired old clown...eh, whatever. I need a beer."
Overall i thought the story was a bit random but written well.