Title: Shapeshifter
Series: Young Justice (animated)
Robin. Regret. It aches.
M’gann looks up from her attempt at apple pie and glances to her left. Wally is sitting hunched over at the opposite end of the metal counter, staring blankly at his half chewed hot dog. This was seriously unusual for the speedster.
Robin.
She hears the soft whisper again; not out loud, but in her head. She frowns at the red head.
“Wally…?” she asks tentatively, floating closer.
He seems to register her voice and slowly looks up at M’gann’s concerned face. Wally quickly breaks into a lop-sided grin, like he was caught doing something dirty.
“Hey Megan, baby. How you doin’?”
He winks at her.
“Wally… Wha—Do you feel okay?”
The speedster’s grin falters for half a second but then it grows wider.
Pain.
“I’m peachy fine. Seriously.”
“But you haven’t even finished your meal,” M’gann gestures to the plate.
Wally squints down at his frankfurter, grabs it with flash speed and shoves it all into his mouth.
“I’b jash tihar,” Wally tries to speak with his cheeks puffed out like a chipmunk.
“…..You’re just tired? Um. Okay,” M'gann started to say, "But-"
"Megan, really. Im fine. Please." Wally's eyes stare at her with a sense of desperation, but he still had a smile on his face. It looked quite fake.
“O-okay.”
Awkward silence.
I not really interesting at cartoon, but I quiet like this fanfiction. And I think is eassy to read it, therefor, I enjoy to read it. I look foward to the content of this story. :)
ReplyDeleteHey! Your fanfiction is still very short, so I feel it's kind of hard to comment on it.
ReplyDeleteI do think that you are a good writer, and that this story could be a good fanfiction in the end, but at this stage it is hard for me to understand the story of it.
It would be nice if you wrote some kind of introduction in the beginning, so that we could get a clue of what it's going to be about, and who the characters are.
Good luck with your writing!
nice start,looking forward to the rest
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